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An optimistic thinker, with eccentric curiosity.

     

     As a thinker, I like to look at the good in things. I like to hope and view an idea as if I already know that it's going to succeed. I like to challenge myself, and am just the type of person who gets super excited (you could compare me to a 3 year old) when I have a new idea or something to explore. I think exploring your curiosities is one of the best things you can do for yourself. In terms of thinking, I find myself curious about numerous different things every single day. Staying true to my eccentric self, I drop everything and google it within 2 minutes of thinking about it. I think this helped me see the big picture outside of my small world.  (June 26)

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      I think EMC is purely a great opportunity. In a school experience full of pointed education towards a regents exam every year, seeing an independent learning curriculum is very refreshing. I understand that I am accountable for this project. I think that SDA’s are very cool. They can be whatever you make them. I want to try to do a lot of different things within my project. To pitch a program of this size to the school board, I need to have everything thought out. This includes graphics, words, and questions. I am ready to devote my attention to this topic, because it is very meaningful to me. I think it could benefit everyone involved. I am able to make this time commitment, because this was something I was planning to do anyway. I just got lucky, I have two great mentors now. I’m already learning about the benefits of mentors. I am curious to see how this class can foster my idea, and how much I can learn and share from it and about it. (June 27)

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     Sometimes, I just don't know what I'm doing. When, that happens, anything I wanted to do, becomes merely something I left behind. I don't want that to happen with this idea. That's why I wanted to explain what my goal is, not only for you, but for myself as well. Now you may be wondering, why? Why do you want to implement a student-based mentoring program into your school? For me, I think our need for a program of this type stems from 2 places. One, is the situation at our school. Everyday, I go to class. I watch other kids go to class. Yes, we have clubs and after school activities, but outside sports, I don't feel like they're emphasized. I sit back and wonder, Bill Gates went to high school right? But this is 2019. We even have hoverboards!!

 

     Why is it that we sit here and wait for a kid to realize their passionate about something on their own, and hope someone will help our world reach new heights? Why can't we make it happen, by fostering their interests now, with the help of someone who already has experience. Two, this idea stems off my talking to many professionals in the field that interests me, medicine. The number one piece of advice they always give me, is to find a mentor. They told me that a mentor is a huge reasons why they to where they are. All of them. So I did find a mentor. Now, I want to help other kids find them too. High school is the age that we can make change. Having a mentor to talk to, ask questions to, and who maybe even work with you, could change your academic career. 

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 My goals for this year and this project are to:

1. Support why we need a mentorship program

2. Answer the question of how we can make it happen

3. Pitch the idea to the school board

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and...

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see where it goes form there!

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Ok. Here I go. 

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What's a school-based student mentorship program anyway?

Well, it kind of depends on what you want it to be. Traditionally, school-based student mentorship programs were implemented to provide youth with caring and consistent adult relationships in order to navigate their way through adolescence and beyond. Usually, the student and the mentor, would choose where and when to meet. School-based programs, supervise these meeting times and maybe even provide a location for them at the school.

Don't we have this?

No, trust me, we don't. What we have, is a school that teaches and learns, and sometimes isn't inclusive, and hasn't realized the best that it can be.

Do some schools already have this system in place?

Community-based programs are already common around many areas, but our community doesn't have one as of now. School-based programs, however are becoming increasingly common as schools manage to connect students with very knowledgeable mentors, and require mentors to have less of a time commitment. Numerous studies have been done by tons of organizations and accumulated metadata to suggest that in our present time, these programs are a very positive experience for the student if done correctly.

Why should we care about students who don’t go out to get help on their own?

All over our school community, people are going through challenges. They face obstacles, they might be feeling down on themselves, there might be numerous different reasons why they can't find a mentor on their own. Perhaps they don't realize what a good mentor could do for them. 

Do we have it in our budget to consider providing this to all schools?

I think that this is something to ask the school board. If we can get enough support, I'm sure we'd get some form of donations, and possibly even volunteers to help run the program. But otherwise, school based student mentorship programs have shown to be very cost effective. Other than possibly screening mentors, field trips, or events held by the program, everything else doesn't need a huge sum of money or maybe doesn't even need any at all.

What will it cost?

Good question, I'm still thinking about that, it depends on what the school will support.

Does this benefit both parties?

Ah, the question I have been waiting for. Evaluation results provide clear evidence that involvement in consistent, long term, well-supervised relationships with adults can yield a wide range of tangible benefits for youth, including improved grades and family relationships and decreased alcohol and drug use. Student interested in medicine can find a professional and learn about their road to their successful career, and might be motivated and inspired to do it as well, or even do it better.  There are just as many benefits in it for mentors as well, which you might not think of. These include being able to support and foster the next generation, leaving their legacy, contributing to the mentor's own personal and professional growth​, being exposed to a growing talent pool, getting professional distinction as someone who can serve as an example and role model for others, enhancing their abilities in coaching, leadership, management, and recruiting, and even forming a lasting career network.​

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Conclusion:

     From these questions, I realized that you guys are a little cruel. But that's okay. It makes sense to criticize new ideas. I agree that I have a lot of obstacles to overcome. I only want to do good for our school and everyone in it, and this idea is going to be put on hold until I have everything figured out, so that maybe this can be something our school is proud of.

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   My idea originally had to do with connecting high school and elementary school students. However, while talking with my coordinators, my perspective has changed. High school students aren't actually  too far off from their middle school days, and are able to reminisce about how they felt coming into high school. Middle school students are in one of the most awkward phases of their lives, and need guidance to successfully transition to high school or to experience growth as a person as they enter their teenage years. That's why I have decided to transition my focus to these two groups. 

     I believe that the middle school to high school framework will be more effective than my original idea for a variety of reasons. This realization was monumental. Transportation for one would be easier. The middle school ends after the high school does.. Theoretically, high school students could take the bus down to the middle school. The biggest reason, however, is the close proximity of age. It will be much easier for high school students to empathize with middle school kids than elementary school kids. I still remember my anxiety and stress as a middle school student about high school and about how much middle school actually matters in the grand scheme of things.

     This month, I really need to figure out what exactly our middle school kids are wondering about or what challenges their facing in their school and out of school lives. In order to reach my goal of either starting or bettering a cross aged school mentorship program, a strong need for this form of intervention must be identified. Without it, I won't have a concrete argument as to why the school should support such an initiative. That is my most pressing and immediate next step this week.

November 18th Journal

Introducing the next essential question.

I've been told that it's finally time to know the why.

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My essential question:

 

What are the problems that modern middle school students struggle with that can be bettered?

     I've chosen to focus on the “Interviews” portion of the SDA menu. However, I am interviewing some people from GHS because this initiative is for our school district in particular. I firmly believe that a cross-age mentorship relationship between an older middle school student or a younger high school student paired with an older high school student would be very beneficial for our school community. Now, I need to prove that. I have collected good outside support regarding my stance which can be accessed in the “Articles” section of my website, but I have yet to establish an informed need for our particular district. That is why I hope to facilitate a couple of unique interviews to move my project forward.

 

     First off, I will be talking with two faculty members at GHS who run the program for at-risk freshmen. I hope to gain a better understanding of what the new generation of incoming freshmen are struggling with and how older kids can help. Then, I’ll be moving onto middle school. I will be having a discussion with the two teachers who run the mentorship program down there. They informed me that they’ve always wanted to add high schoolers, but have never had the time. The goal for this is to visit the middle school again and concretely identify the need and what we can do here. Finally, if all goes well, I will culminate my project with a panel with some of the eighth graders up at the middle school. I envision it to be a simple conversation where they can safely tell me what they believe is their biggest struggles as a middle school student.

 

     From there, I’d send out a survey to the eighth graders to see how they would feel about connecting with experienced high school students. I’m planning on creating a video culminating in the mentioned efforts. I need to get everyone’s permission and if they accept, I can make a documentary of sorts showing my interviewees responding to my questions. To conclude, my overarching goal is really to prove why these mentoring relationships are needed at our school. If every student was completely happy and knowledgeable, we wouldn’t need this. However, I don’t think that’s the case.

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December 6th Post

Q-Focus Statement

The role of mentorship programs in schools is to provide students in need of a positive relationship with a mentor who can help them establish an attachment to something at school and can assist in pushing the student towards their areas of interest.

Category Questions

Knowledge:

What do the current district mentorship programs aim to accomplish?

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Comprehension:

How would you classify the challenges that middle school and young high school students face?

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Application:

What examples can you find to show that mentorship programs address the above needs?

Catergory Questions Pt. 2

Analysis:

Can you predict the outcome if the district used the mentorship initiatives to advance the transition process from middle school to high school?

 

Evaluation:

How would you prioritize the relationship established in the program over anything else?

 

Synthesis:

What way would you design a system to connect middle school students to the high schoolers effectively?

What did I do TO succeed at this task?

To succeed in my SDA, I needed to recognize my purpose. I then fit that purpose into where I want my project to go. My purpose was to inform others of what I learned from my interviews. I combined it with my future plans by analyzing how the mentorship programs that my interviews covered could be improved upon, and why they're even there.

How did I overcome the challenges I faced?

One of the hardest things about my project is that I depend heavily on other people who I have no control over. I had to persistently send emails and reply in a timely fashion to schedule my interviews. Another challenge for me was in making my video since the software got fairly confusing the more snazzy I wanted to make it. In order to create something I was proud of despite the fact that I am not a professional videographer, I watched videos and looked at tutorials on how to incorporate sound and effects seamlessly.

Did I meet my own standards for a quality project?

Yes, I did. I set up my own camera lighting and strategically chose a place next to the windows that would allow my face to appear more vibrant. I added relevant snippets from my interviews that I felt really inspired me. One example is when Mrs. Clegg reminded me that there are students at our school who don't feel a social connection to anyone or anything in it. At the end of the day, my product was relevant and serves as a super helpful springboard into my future endeavors.

What Do I still need to work on?

I need to work on managing my time better. I need to plan and make goals more cohesively and directly. I should at this point be done with umbrella goals. I must create specific, reasonable goals that keeps me on track. Basically, I need to work on my self initiative to successfully see this project, which I care about deeply, to the end.

How might i do it differently?

I could have asked for a video interview to make my project more entertaining and interactive. Other than that, I was happily surprised at the outcome of this SDA.

January Midterm Journal

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January 9th

For the past few months, I've explored the topic of school-based mentorship programs in regards to why we need them and what impact they can facilitate for students. I have investigated research on the positive effects of mentors neurologically and have scoured studies of past mentorship programs and their effectiveness. I firmly believe that these initiatives have a positive effect on the school community by prioritizing individuals and the differences that we all have. I understand now that there are people out there that don't know why they come to school and I have experienced the stress and anxiety of modern teenage life. I want to connect the whole story back to singular people. I definetly wished I had a mentor when I was younger, and I'm sure others feel the same. I hope to tap into their emotions. My goal is to prove that the development of a well-designed cross aged mentorship program should be a priority for our school district. Many middle school students are at a loss about what to expect at high school and no adult really ever lays it on straight. High schoolers with experience have the skills to mentor these younger kids to give them a helping hand and help them plan ahead for their future. I intend to argue that the comfort in being able to ask someone for help is a feeling that all kids in our schools should feel, especially in the treacherous world we have created. My midterm will showcase stories and testimonials of general student profiles and real student stories. It will provide all the research necessary to back up how vastly different kinds of students could benefit from a mentorship program. I plan to start my presentation by asking my audience to reflect on their high school journey and the various mentors they've had in their lives. This is my hook because it is the strong pathos that I need to tie my audience to my topic. I want people to leave my presentation empowered to connect with their own mentors again and looking at teenagers from a different perspective.

January 16th Journal

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My hook will be the first two posters where I will ask the audience about mentors in their own lives and explain how difficult high school is now compared to when they were in school. My main goal is to persuade them to believe and advocate for a cross aged mentorship program in our district. We will walk through the story of why.

My first thoughts about the presentation revolve around just how I hard I learned that it is to articulate how you feel about something to other people. Overall, I don't think it was my best but it was far from my worst. My feedback was neither positive nor negative in large. Most of the judges were conflicted on what side of the spectrum to place me. There were of course a couple of outliers with one thinking I was pretty terrible and another thinking that I was perfect. It really is all about how people perceive you. The best presenter gets the most people's attention. Personally, I learned that no matter how passionate you are about something, getting that across won't always be easy. No matter what you do people will want more, and that's okay. I managed my time fairly poorly. I used most of it to work on my large amount of posters rather than to fully flesh out a developed presentation. I wish I had done less posters or had used just a chart or something because most people didn't care about them. Everyone was more curious about my thoughts, ideas, and especially motivations. The moment I'm most proud of is when one of my judges came up with an idea based on my presentation. He suggested that I create a Guilderland Alumni Network in partnership with Sources of Strength . This means that I'd collect emails of graduating seniors for current ones to ask questions to and connect with. This idea was suggested by former alumni so I would assume that others are interested as well.

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This is a really cool idea and could be something I could run by Mrs. Springsteen. If I could do this over again, I would be more creative. I would ditch my posters and fully focus on getting my message across in a thought provoking way. I would ask more questions and introduce shocking facts to catalyze interest. In the future, I will focus on a full circle story rather than a representation of information. I will focus on a distinct narrative structure, not explaining my work in a monotonous way. I will also prioritize certain aspects. I realized that a lot of judges missed didn't see how I collaborated on my project because I didn't get time to explain my interviews in all that was going on. That should have been a focus. The feedback that stuck out the most was someone's comment that they wished I had spoke beyond the the traditional concept of a "mentor." That puzzled me for a long time after I saw it. I'm curious to research what a mentor is beyond the streamlined version; maybe there is much I still need to learn. The main question I am diving into next is if there are model programs out there for our school to successfully model a cross aged program after. The middle school to high school transition team has taken a liking to my ideas so I hope to work closely with them in the future.

Midterm Reflection Journal

February 13th Journal

From my midterm, I was able to walk away with the notion that my idea for a cross-aged mentorship program in Guilderland Central School District would be accepted. I have completed the preliminary steps of introducing the concept of mentors and the benefits of school based mentoring. However, the midterm taught me that people care much more about the real world and personal stories. They want to know how mentorship programs have impacted school districts in our area and how we can build one based on that. I guess I should have anticipated this; selling a mentorship program is pretty simple. Now, it's about proof of concept. I need to accumulate real world mentorship programs and collect data from our own community. A model program will help our new one to operate smoothly, so collaboration is key. That’s why I need to contact a whole lot more people.

  • Main Questions

  1. What do Farnsworth Middle School eighth graders struggle with and fear and how does the current transition process attempt to help?

  2. Can I reach out to local coordinators of mentorship programs for advice and guidance?

  3. What model programs manage to address academic and social needs of mentees at the same time while providing attention to the relationship built?

March 6th Journal - March SDA


I have decided to tackle the NPR Student Podcast Challenge for my March SDA. By doing so, I am hoping to bolster the “creativity” aspect of my project because I have gone far into a lot of the other “Cs.” My goal for this podcast is to persuade my audience that they need a mentorship program in their school or workspace. I want anyone who hears it to think about structured mentoring and mentoring in general beyond just the generic meaning of a mentor. I want to use three particular elements to connect with the listeners: logos, pathos, and kairos. I had a really neat idea to ask some of very talented friends to play some music for me to use. I am hoping to ask students to provide voice clips for me to establish credibility and I will willfully use hard evidence to please my critics. I want to start my podcast by asking the “what if” question - what if you had a true mentor even before high school? Then, I plan to go backwards in my story. I will start with the end result and work back to answer the question of why real students need mentors in the first place. I am still hoping to get some data previously collected from the middle school about anxiety for middle schoolers and I hope to assist in the eighth grade transition process in any way I can. I’ve realized that our school needs some more time to establish a firmly footed cross aged mentorship program, but I hope with this SDA to become one step closer to making it happen.

March SDA 

Below is a link to a copied version of my survey. I collaborated with the middle school and my coordinators to create a transition survey for incoming freshmen this month. I believe that this information will be useful next year when we are planning a mentorship program for the eighth graders because it will help us understand what they are struggling with and how we can help.

March SDA Reflection

     This SDA was something that I have been wanting to do for the longest time. I have not yet been able to collect my own original data regarding the need for mentorship in our school district. I have looked at numbers collected by prominent organizations and programs regarding the biggest problems that high schoolers face and how those issues are connected to school. However, I hadn’t yet been able to assess the needs of our own incoming freshmen. I designed my survey in a manner that is meant to be simple and easy. I looked at various other surveys which inspired my questions. My research on what incoming freshmen tend to struggle with informed the kind of questions that would be relevant to ask. One example is a question where I ask students if social media boosts their confidence. According to some of my sources, social media has often been blamed for increasing anxiety and low self esteem among teens. If my survey ends up going out during this chaotic time, I will be able to clearly spot patterns since the answers are on a scale. I thought I managed my time better than I usually do. I have used this survey to launch me into my next path being my deep dive on the root causes of anxiety and stress for teens. I focused on the “C” of connections most during this assignment. I was actively trying to connect data online about the struggles of high schoolers to our own district. I wanted to compare my data once I got my survey results back: we will see if that happens. This assignment hasn’t seen its end so I haven’t learned what I was hoping to yet. I need the survey to go out for it to be useful. However, I am now examining a number of carefully picked sources to find the root cause of anxiety and stress and how we can help. This program won’t see its beginning till next year but this survey can help me end the year with evidence that our incoming freshmen need a peer mentor and will help me organize my thoughts to clearly define the culprit behind the struggles these teens face. My goal moving forward is to dig deep into some of my new sources to propose a reason for teenage trauma.

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April 2nd Journal

Below is the audio for my journal, thank you for listening!

Meghana Bhupati - April 2nd
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Below is my t-chart where I laid out my most important findings from my 3 sources.

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TED Talk Review 

     For my TED Talk Review, I watched both Sam Harris’s TED Talk Science Can Answer Moral Questions and Malcolm Gladwell’s TED talk Choice, Happiness, & Spaghetti Sauce. The premise of Harris’s talk was to persuade the audience that science can -- and should -- be an authority on moral issues, shaping human values and setting out what constitutes a good life. Harris makes it clear that questions of how humans flourish have right and wrong answers. He also points out that values are indeed facts about the wellbeing of conscious creatures and that whenever facts are being considered, certain opinions should be excluded. One of these “opinions” is religion. Harris introduces us to what he calls a moral continuum, and tells us that we must strive to find a balance in it: we can’t be extreme in either direction. Gladwell’s talk discussed American market researcher and psychophysicist Howard Moskowitz’s search for the perfect spaghetti sauce to make an argument about the nature of choice and happiness. Gladwell starts with making the witty claim that people don’t know what they want: Moskowitz realized that pretty quickly when sitting people down and asking focus groups what type of spaghetti sauce they would want. However, searching for the universal spaghetti sauce wouldn’t work: you just can’t satisfy everyone. Gladwell asserts that the concept of horizontal segmentation changed everything. Horizontal segmentation meant that there was no good and bad. There are just different kinds for different people. He tries to make the point that having many choices can make it easier to sell your product rather than searching for an ideal recipe.

     These two talks couldn’t be more different. The only similarity I found was that both speakers used humor to their advantage and really connected to the audience by being conversational. That way, it is less like you’re being lectured at and more like you’re engaging in the discussion too. Harris used a lot of logos in his talk. He backed up every claim with examples. Gladwell was more the storytelling type. He told us an intimate story of one particular researcher’s exploration to make a universal argument that related to the audience. Harris used a lot of pathos as well. He mentioned children getting beaten and about how people out there throw battery acid at the faces of women in cloth bags. He even relates to every individual audience member by asking them what they would do if their daughter was raped. Bringing up topics that most of us are uncomfortable with discussing is a huge attention grabber in any speech. Gladwell did a great job of taking his audience on an emotional rollercoaster. He asked you to make conscious decisions and judgments as he was talking about choosing how you like your coffee and the fact that you can cluster data points for patterns. His whole speech was based off a general study so it was easy to relate to. Harris barely used any filler words and that inspired me to listen intently for every word he said. Gladwell took the more humorous and simple route: it was much easier to understand that way.

     Harris’s TED talk relates to my topic since the question of mentorship and how we got to a situation where so many kids are experiencing mental issues are based on facts. It may be a more morally grounded question regarding how we treat teenagers and social pressures, but science can provide a more definitive answer. This would come through the form of studies and neurological data. Gladwell’s TED talk relates to my topic because it shows how variability is an important part of the human persona. Most teens probably don’t know what they want in a friend, a mentor, or for themselves. It is all about options and also understanding that different people respond to stress in different ways. It could be hard to identify kids who need help because some of them seem fine: we need to establish choices when matching mentors and mentees. For my final exhibition for EMC, I will take Gladwell’s storytelling and Harris’s humor. I will take Harris’s objective view to make a wide spanning moral argument like Gladwell did. For me, that argument will come down to why mentors are the answer to obstacles in high school.

APRIL 9 JOURNAL POST

I had a check-in meeting with Mr. Bott this afternoon. I’ve been working to answer the new questions that arose from my four souces. I focused on comparing global educational models. I found that Finland is doing so well academically because they really emphasize relaxed independant problem solving over simply telling their students how to do things. It is all about cooperation not competition. I also talked about my love of the DEL grading system that we are employing now. It has really inspired me to freely explore the topics I have been learning rather than chase a high numerical grade. I think we should keep it. A report published by the OECD talked about how kids whose parents just talked with them (not about homework or tests) had lower stress and anxiety levels. Taking parental pressure out the equation would really lighten the load for many teens out there. Social media is yet another factor that has correlated to a spike in depressive symptoms. It is important to remember that as smartphone use skyrocketed around 2015, depressive symptoms did the same. It is a combination of FOMO and external validation that drives teenage addiction to social media. Posting the number of followers and likes someone has makes comparisons inevitable. When I do set up a mentorship program, I want to focus on real social connection. I think stress education should be incorporated and a relaxed emphasis on learning should be a priority. These incoming high schoolers need to know that they don’t have to be perfect to be happy or successful. Now I’m looking to figure out why mostly girls are experiencing depression nowadays by reading the book Under Pressure by Lisa Damour, P.H.D.

April 16th Journal Post

This week, I have been reading the book Under Pressure written by Lisa Damour, PHD. Dr. Damour is a psychologist who has worked in various all girl schools and has researched stress and anxiety among girls for longer than I have been alive. She was in her profession during 2015 when we entered the smartphone age, so she saw firsthand how digital devices have affected girls. This book is nonfiction and came out only last year, garnering amazing reviews by sources like USA Today. It has been valuable for me to understand what stress and depression is from a professional’s point of view. Dr. Damour reaffirmed that girls almost exclusively have experienced a spike in depressive symptoms recently. She pointed out that research is leaning towards the notion that the situation for girls has gotten worse and its not just that girls share more about their problems now than before. She really challenged my assumption that all stress and anxiety is bad by using science. Healthy stress allows our body to improve our resilience to future hardships. Anxiety has helped human avoid danger for centuries. Dr. Damour further speaks about how the feeling of anxiety is a biological, emotional, mental, and physical workout. She also explains that digital devices and media contribute to our stress because they remove our ability to compartmentalize or “just not think about” negative information. She discusses the value of putting slack in the system by not overplanning activities and how girls can benefit from stress and anxiety by accepting them as a friend. Furthermore, she threw me for a loop when she concluded that empathy is better than reassurance when handling teenage girl problems. I want to continue reading this novel to see how her modern experiences and knowledge can connect to my project.

April 23rd Journal Post

This week, my goal was to finish the novel Under Pressure. I finally got into the part where Dr. Damour discussed girls at school. She points out that girls outperform boys in every way at school, but lack the confidence to make it to upper level positions in their professional careers.This is because girls tend to overexert themselves in their schoolwork when they don't have to. This leaves them feeling assured of their work ethic, but never their talents. Girls believe that they need ot be fully qualified to apply for a job, while boys just believe that they need some of the qualifications. Dr. Damour emphasized that girls feel like they need to do great in school in order to not disappoint adults. Girls also tend to take things that these educators say more personally than boys do, and it has a huge effect on their self esteem. Fighting stress and anxiety at school boils down to nurturing the viewpoint that school is only a beneficial and progressive program to build capabilities by alternating demands and respites. Dr. Damour wants teachers to change the way education is presented; it should be framed in a positive and capacity-building model to eliminate stress associated with learning. This growth mindset can make all the difference. I reached out to Dr. Damour in hopes of conducting an interview because I feel like her experience and feminist views could answer a lot of my remaining questions. I also hope to discuss my mentorship program idea with her, and ask if she has worked with similar programs in the past. She could give me a lot of insight into what to prioritize when making mentor-mentee matches. This exchange will be my next main focus before I transition to my final product.

April 30th Journal Post

I have spent this week debating over what it is I want my essential question to be. I was told that it should be something that excites me, but can can also inspire others. With that in mind, I have decided to pose the question: why is a peer mentor the best way to address the concerns associated with a transition into high school? I think that this question encapsulates everything that I have been researching throughout the year. I get to identify what the underlying reason is to why the transition process is so difficult and make it clear to the audience that stress and anxiety is the foundation for most problems that a freshmen will face. I can prove to the audience that a peer mentor is the best option to rewrite the bad reputation society has given stress and anxiety. Like Dr. Damour told me in our interview, juniors are the most grounded people in high school. They have found their niche, and have a lot of advice to give. I want to show the audience that being a peer mentor is all about instilling in someone else everything you wish you could’ve known before they have to face it themselves. Within this essential question, I can even make the delineation between a peer mentor and counselor while laying out the main concerns that peer mentors will have address. No adult I have spoken to so far has denied the value of a mentorship program, but I will have to get across that there is no better alternative to consider when it comes to addressing incoming freshmen and their turmoils. For my visual presentation, I am deciding between an animation or a speech-type video. I want it to be eye catching, yet emotional - because that is what high shool is.

May 7th Journal Post

I want to start by reminding you of my essential question: why is a peer mentor the best way to address the concerns associated with a transition into high school? I have finally decided to use a visual format with me talking. My face and expressions and voice would be showcased, but so would visuals next to me. You can imagine it like one of those science youtube channels. I have also decided on the most important things are for me to focus on in this final product keeping in mind my 10-15 minute time restraint. I will start with my story being the foundation or catalyst for further discussion. Next, I will compare the elementary to middle school transition to that of middle school to high school. It is easy to forget that incoming freshmen have already experienced a massive shift in their life. The shift to high school actually makes their life better overall, and its common to overlook that. Then, I want to transition the audience to thinking about the problem: why is the transition to high school so hard? That will lunch me into my spheal on stress and anxiety and I might even discuss the lessons I have learned from Under Pressure to explore why girls have exclusively experienced spikes in depressive symptoms. I will then introduce what I believe needs to change: the secret to beating stress and anxiety. Following that, I will reassure the audience that a peer mentor is the key to unlocking a freshmen year where you feel in control. Now, I am working on creating a script/storyboard to succinctly lay out my talking points and the pathos I want to evoke through them. I want the audience to leave the video with confidence in a mentorship program and a new outlook towards school and mental health.

May 14th Journal

​I have already discussed in-depth via my last journal post exactly what my plans are for this project. To summarize, it will be a visual presentation that will highlight me and fun animations on the side. My angle is to be informative in a conversational backdrop. I want the video to feel more like an intimate conversation between me and the viewer and less like a lecture or debate. I will be sourcing the novel Under Pressure and data collected by the Pew Science Center, Association for Psychological Science, and New York University. Doing this will help me establish credibility: I know the importance of backing up EVERY claim with an example. I strive for my final product to be more showing and less telling despite the emphasis on oral language to express my findings. My presentation will begin with establishing context and setting. This means that I will discuss (in a rather humorous manner) how my transition to high school went - I am going to be a junior in high school. I am well put together now, but I struggled a lot in my early high school days. I might even mention how much worse off this year’s incoming freshmen are. I am doing a lot of setting up before I reach my essential question. I need to next explain the paradigm of stress and anxiety. I will use that to launch into my essential question. Ok, now we know the problem, but how will a mentor help? That will be the finale of this visual presentation as it will likely be my starting point next year as well. In terms of visuals, I hope to use images relevant to what I am talking about - technology, kids looking stressed, etc. I want those pictures to evoke some pathos in my audience, so that they too can feel like an incoming freshman again.

May 21st Journal

This week, I have generated my entire visual storyboard for my final project. Firstly, I have a section for my voiceovers where I write verbatim what I want to say. Then, I created a section for my visuals. These include any pictures or screen layovers that I want to incorporate. I added camera movements here too. Finally, I have a narrator section where I put in directions for myself on what vocal tones use, and various hand motion suggestions as well. I am doing this so that I can record my scenes with an outcome in mind and not get lost. I have decided to use the acronym T.E.A.M. to present and title my video. I am still deciding between ideas on what T.E.A.M. should stand for. Some examples are Together Educating and Mentoring and Teaching Everyone that Anxiety Matters. Since last time, I have added in a model program called CAMP that has much statistical evidence behind it as being promising to improve student engagement and connection to and in their school environment. I believe this framework is an ideal one to operate with in the future because it really prioritizes social improvement. I have also removed flippant language that I had used before; I realized that I can’t assume high school is going to be better than middle school for everyone like it was for me. I decided to present it as the fact that everyone has the opportunity to make high school better, and that peer mentors can help. I also fixed some rhetorical language to make my transitions smoother. I need to think about my audience - how would they react if I put in this or that. I want my message to stick, and not be another lecture that they have to endure.

May 28th Journal Post

I have now finalized my script, and am getting ready to jump into the technical aspect of things. I have been practicing reading my script aloud and recording myself. If I cringe when I play myself back, I try again. There is a very specific way you need to project in order to hold an audience’s attention, so I am making sure to master that. I also have finished my annotated bibliography which contains around 5-6 of my best sources that I have also discussed in my final. Some of my sources include the novel Under Pressure and the documentary Race to Nowhere. I want to start dry run filming to get a feel for how to style my video, and how my voice is going to sound across the screen. I am very confident in my editing abilities, I can cover up any hiccups along the way. I will focus on my introduction - this is where I will introduce my final acronym: T.E.A.M. This stands for Together Empowering All Mentees. I feel like it will be great to set up the discussion around my program. I am fairly worried about the technical side. I don’t want to go overly complicated, but I do want to establish humor with my camera angles and panning. I am trying to work on keeping my product informational yet engaging. The lecture voice is all to familiar to me so I am trying to avoid it at all costs. Hopefully I won’t run into any technical issues, but I think After Effects and Wondershare Filmora will cooperate. I think that my script has a firm beginning, middle, and end. I need to make sure that story writes out in my visual presentation as well.

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